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It was early in the morning when we left. There was dead
silence in the car. We were going on a journey to the
lakefront, were a pontoon boat was waiting for us. It was
certainly going to be an exciting trip. we first needed to get
fitted for life jackets. then we boarded the boat and stored
our stuff in the storage compartments under the seats. after
that, we were off into the deep blue see. we swam in more
than 60 feet deep water. once we got tired we headed to
shore to get some ice cream (yummy yummy). after we ate
i got to drive. it was petal to the metal. we were going 50
mph. we were out there for 8 hours and only used 5.7
gallons of gas. The whole experience was one of the most
fun things i have ever done.
Maybe you could try using correct conventions such as capitals and spelling.
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